I like it!
Now for the criticism (Don't take it too seriously, I've spent a lot of time in the music field)
Theirs a descending chord sequence that happens 2 or 3 times during the song. There needs to be a resolution there, and that chord sequence goes far from it.
Also, the solo needs to have a little bit more tonality. I know it's neat and edgy, but it should fit with the song enough that you want to keep listening.
Added a track ^