Quote from: vampirefrog on February 29, 2012, 09:56:49 PMQuote from: Zoocata on January 31, 2012, 12:25:53 AM
Lol seriously go suicide yourself..
Don't you mean... SUICIZE?
I would recommend you to check out the newcomers paragraph for sentences right here.
Structure
01. The structure of your sentence seems to say enough that you have the ability to create paragraphs.
02. The wording structure is correct also (good job).
Font
03. The choice of font are fitting their wording (yet there are still a lot of font mistakes), but aren't really fitting the sentence. For example, the "Sans Serif" font isn't fitting for being outside a paragraph. It would fit more in a worded list or an indented paragraph.
This also counts for the "Comic Sans" fonts.
Colour
04. The colour is very basic, but is fitting the sentence. Some more complex colouring would be nice actually because it's all just straight and flat, which is pretty boring. If you added some rainbow fonts to your sentence i think it would be easier to read.
Detailing
05. The detailing is something I dislike from that post. Every area looks very similar to the next area which you read. That's why I would advice you to think about what you would find when reading a post on the internet. Some ideas of my own are to replace certain letters which stand out and swap them for symbols, in effect i would post "5U!C1Z3" for readability and to make it more interesting when reading your comments. It makes it more easier to look better and easier to navigate through. Another idea is to keep several spaces between each letter.
Variety
06. Keep in mind it's not all about the font. To be less vulnerable, fonts have been invented a while ago and really shouldn't be left out in forums.
There are 71 fonts while the sentence is being very symmetrical. What about using all of the 71 fonts for each character of your sentence?
Overall
The sentence isn't bad in first sight, but if you have a bit of a "trained" eye, you certainly can see the font and colours are pretty improper and the font is very monotome. It's not bad for a first attempt though. I'll rate your reply 2/10 for now seeing as you included a picture for effort.